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Don't cry, my darling.
Didn't anyone say that
You are beautiful?

Don't shed a tear, sweet.
Their opinions mean nothing.
You are just perfect.

Don't let them win, love.
You are stronger than they are.
You're invincible.

Don't quit the race, dear.
You're new and improved, winning
Is just a title.

Don't give up, starshine.
You're only as stellar as
You believe you are.

Don't shy from the light.
Shine as bright as your soul can.
Nothing's stopping you.

The world is for you.
Make of it what you want to,
I'll always be here.
I've taken a liking to haikus. :)
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dweckie Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Writer
Aw, this made me tear up :aww:
I love haikus :heart:
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otakuplaywright Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
They're so much fun to write, too. I like the challenge of fitting the syllables just right.
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dweckie Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Student Writer
Yes, and trying to fit in everything in such a short space too. ^^
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bandgeek4evur Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw that's a nice pick-me up haiku. Nice one Rina
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jochannon Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
If you ever want to get published, look me up: [link]
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funnygirlygirl99 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think that is a really cool haiku. I am not that good a think of this kind of stuff, but i would like to. :)
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otakuplaywright Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's pretty easy once you put your mind to it. I used to suck at these, believe it or not. :P
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funnygirlygirl99 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well i hope to get better and maybe put some up.
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